Evaluation of mini brief

 At the start of our mini brief this is one of the first mistakes of our short film. This shot of Nimat is slightly blury. This then makes our film look unprofessional and can be improved. It might make the film difficult to understand and confused.

After editing the film we noticed that there was a big cut from this screenshot to the one below. This made our film look a little rushed and it needs to be more of a smooth transition rather than just cutting from one part to another quickly. It could cause disorientation for the audience. 

This is a screenshot of the couple hugging. The two actors are not spaced in the middle of the frame. This can be seen as unprofessional because when there is an antagonist they are usually positioned off-centred because they are the bad people, if there is something good happening it is usually positioned in the centre of the frame therefore this doesn't look right. 

In tis shot-reverse-shot the camera is slightly shaky therefore it cause the shot to be slightly blurred. This causes our mini brief to look unprofessional and can be improved by using a tripod. 

In these three screenshots there are alot of things in the mise en scene that has caused the scene to look unprofessional and improper. This can be improved by changing location to suit the genre and what is happening in the scene.

I belive one of our strengths of the mini brief was the reaction shot of Aaron when he realises that his partner has returned home. Another strength would be the match on action of Nimat coming through the door. This ensures the audience of what is going on and they feel as if they are following well. Also the shot reverse shot that happens at the end when Aaron is proposing really works well as we see Nimat's reaction and also Aaron's face whilst proposing.